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Judging Others

Judging Others

Judging Others

Using Flash Fiction and Real-Life Experience: The Effectiveness of a Quick Story to Learn Lessons

Flash fiction, also known as micro-fiction, is a form of storytelling that presents a complete narrative in a very brief format. It typically consists of a few hundred words or even just a few sentences. Similar to my article when discussing my short story Paralyzed in The Art of Flash Fiction in Horror: Evoking Chills in Few Words.

In this article, we will explore the concept of using flash fiction, along with real-life experiences, as a powerful tool for learning valuable life lessons. We will draw inspiration from my short story Judging Others to illustrate how such narratives can have a profound impact on our perceptions and behaviors.



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What is Flash Fiction?

Flash fiction is an artful storytelling technique that distills a narrative into its essence, presenting a complete story within a limited word count. It requires skillful crafting to convey emotions, themes, and character development concisely. The brevity of flash fiction enables readers to consume the entire story swiftly, making it an effective medium for imparting life lessons efficiently.

The Power of Concise Storytelling

Flash fiction’s power lies in its ability to engage readers with compelling narratives that can be read in just a few minutes. This format is perfect for the fast-paced world we live in, where attention spans are often short. Despite its brevity, flash fiction can leave a lasting impact on readers, provoking thought and reflection. 

Learning Through Personal Experience

Personal experiences have a profound impact on our lives. They shape our perspectives, beliefs, and attitudes towards others. By sharing and reflecting on personal experiences, we open ourselves to learning from both our triumphs and mistakes. Incorporating real-life experiences into flash fiction adds authenticity and relatability to the storytelling. 

A Personal Experience in Flash Fiction

*Spoiler Alert* – Read “Judging Others” first before jumping to this section.

In my short story, the protagonist, a young man, is rushing through the Port Authority Bus Terminal in New York City, attempting to catch a bus to New Jersey for a date with Angela, a graphic designer he’s been meaning to meet. Navigating the labyrinthine terminal, he struggles to understand how to purchase a ticket from an automated machine. A seemingly homeless man approaches to help, but the protagonist initially rebuffs him out of fear and discomfort. Time continues to pass, and he gets increasingly desperate, realizing he might miss his date.

Finally, the homeless man, persistent, offers his help again. This time, the protagonist accepts, and the man quickly procures the necessary ticket. The protagonist, feeling remorseful, gives him ten dollars in gratitude. The story concludes as the protagonist heads to New Jersey, contemplating the prejudices he held and the man who helped him.


Understanding Prejudices and Biases

The protagonist’s initial reluctance to accept help from the homeless man reveals the existence of prejudices and biases that cloud his judgment. We all carry biases, often unconsciously, which affect how we interact with others. Recognizing these biases is crucial for personal growth and fostering a more compassionate society. 

Overcoming Fear and Discomfort

The protagonist’s fear and discomfort are common emotions when encountering unfamiliar situations or people. However, the story demonstrates that stepping out of one’s comfort zone can lead to surprising and positive outcomes. Embracing discomfort can be transformative and lead to personal growth.

Acts of Kindness and Redemption

The homeless man’s persistent kindness, despite the initial rejection, portrays the power of empathy and compassion. His act of redemption allows the protagonist to reconsider his prejudices and judgments. This reminds us that small acts of kindness can have a profound impact on others’ lives.

The Importance of Empathy

Empathy is the ability to understand and share the feelings of another person. In Judging Others, the protagonist’s empathy for the homeless man grows, leading to a change in his behavior. Practicing empathy is crucial for building meaningful connections and fostering a more understanding society.

Lessons from the Terminal

The bus terminal in the story serves as a metaphor for life’s complexities and challenges. It symbolizes the maze of human experiences and emotions we all navigate. By learning from the protagonist’s experience, readers can gain insights into their own journeys and interactions with others.

Applying Lessons to Real Life

The lessons derived from flash fiction can be applied to real-life situations. By reflecting on the story and the characters’ actions, readers can become more aware of their own behaviors and attitudes. This self-awareness empowers individuals to make positive changes in their lives and relationships.

The Ripple Effect of Actions

The story highlights the ripple effect of actions, both positive and negative. A single act of kindness can inspire others to do the same, creating a chain reaction of goodwill. Similarly, a negative action can perpetuate a cycle of harm. “Judging Others” reminds us of the impact our actions can have on the world around us.

A Reminder of Our Humanity

Flash fiction stories like “Judging Others” serve as poignant reminders of our shared humanity. They remind us that behind every face, there is a story, and every individual deserves empathy and respect. In a world often characterized by division, these stories can bridge gaps and foster unity.

The Impact of Quick Stories

The brevity of flash fiction makes it easily shareable across various platforms, including social media. As these stories spread, they reach a broader audience and amplify their impact. This phenomenon demonstrates the power of storytelling to connect people and inspire change.

Why Flash Fiction Works

Flash fiction works because it respects the modern reader’s limited time and attention span. Its concise nature allows it to be readily consumed without compromising on emotional depth and thought-provoking themes. Through flash fiction, writers can deliver compelling messages efficiently.

Notable Works of Flash Fiction

The Egg by Andy Weir: This thought-provoking flash fiction presents a conversation between a person who has just died and a deity-like figure. The revelation that everyone is the same soul living multiple lives, experiencing every human perspective, emphasizes the interconnectedness of humanity and the importance of empathy and understanding towards others.

The Last Question by Isaac Asimov: In this science fiction flash fiction, Asimov contemplates the concept of immortality and the fate of humanity. The story explores the idea that every problem has a solution and the continuous search for knowledge and improvement is the essence of human existence.

For Sale: Baby Shoes, Never Worn by Ernest Hemingway: Often cited as the epitome of flash fiction, this poignant six-word story evokes deep emotions and tells a heartbreaking tale of loss and acceptance. It highlights the power of brevity in storytelling and the ability to convey powerful messages in just a few words. Though the title is the story itself, what’s linked is the Wikipedia page that discusses this further.

If you are interested in learning more about writing flash fiction then check out The Rose Metal Press Field Guide to Writing Flash Fiction and Flash Nonfiction.

Final Thoughts

Flash fiction, with its ability to combine real-life experiences and succinct storytelling, offers a powerful way to learn essential life lessons. The short story “Judging Others” exemplifies the impact of quick stories on challenging our biases, promoting empathy, and encouraging personal growth. By incorporating flash fiction and real-life experiences into our lives, we can foster a more compassionate and understanding society.

If you enjoyed this, consider reading my other short stories and the lessons I provide with them.

Judging Others